Toddler Dies In Consultation Room

Membre's group :

Charlotte Jean, Johanne Thuia, Natacha Marly and Joseph Bourgine.

American Members :

Makenzie Norwill, Lacey Howell

And the title of our article is : Toddler died in consultation room after hour-long wait to see nurse

Here's the link to the article : http://www.telegraph.co.uk/health/healthnews/10318177/Toddler-died-in-consultation-room-after-hour-long-wait-to-see-nurse.html

Corrected text :

Introduction :

In this topic, we will talk about an article written by Hayley Dixon, a general news report for the Daily Telegraph. The subject of this article is the death of a two-year-old child. The drama happened in a consultation room of Marston Surgery, in Marston Moretan, a small town near Bedford in England. The reporter followed the inquest.
Bourgine Joseph.

First part :

On 5 October 2012, Lucie Linforth, a child barely two years was driven by his father to the GP's surgery because she was having difficulty breathing. Last year, she had already gone to the hospital following a severe cough and fever overnight. But this time, things didn’t go well. What is surpising is that the family lives thirty seconds away from the hospital and the father believed there was “nothing out of the ordinary” about his daughter’s condition on the morning of her death. He knew she would bounce back, but the child was already dead when the minor illnesses nurse took her by their shoulders. After seeing Ms Clegg, an experienced nurse, she was driven to the Bedford Hospital by ambulance. There, they pronounced her dead.
Thuia Johanne.

Second part :

An inquest was opened. According to the father, they waited too long before seeing the nurse. The other patients had commented that she was having difficulty breathing. The doctor Roger Malcolmson said that if she had been seen by somebody qualified, they would have been sent directly to hospital. Who is right ? Is it the nurse who is wrong or could have the child could been saved ? Maybe the hospital is lacking staff. Elsewhere, one of the receptionists, Kyra Wheeler, said there had been between fifteen and twenty patients in the waiting room that day.
Jean Charlotte.

Conclusion :

In conclusion, we can say that if Mr Linforth had seen someone who was qualified faster, and above all, if he had gone to the hospital closest to his house (there is barely thirty seconds from their house to the hospital, according to the words of Mr Linforth), Lucie might still be alive today: even if he says that he didn’t know that his daughter would die, several witnesses who were in the waiting room could see how sick Lucie was. But, he was not the only person in the wrong: if the receptionists had put Lucie first in line, she could have been saved.
Marly Natacha.

Original text :

Introduction :

In this topic, we will talk about an article wrote by Hayley Dixon, a general news report for the Daily Telegraph. The subject of this article is the death of a two years old child. The drama happened in a consultation room of Marston Surger, in Marston Moretan, a small town near Bedford in England. The reporter follow the inquest.
Bourgine Joseph.

Development :

The 5th October 2012, Lucie Linforth, a child barely two years was driven by his father to the GP surgery because she was having difficulty breathing. Last year, she was already gone to the hospital following a severe cough and fever overnight. But this time, things didn’t well happen. Yet, the family lived at thirty seconds from the hospital and the father believed there was “nothing out of the ordinary” about his daughter’s condition on the morning of her death. He knew she would bounce back, but the child was already dead when the minor illnesses nurse took her by their shoulders. After seeing Ms Clegg, an experienced nurse, she was driven to the Bedford Hospital by ambulance. There, they have pronounced his death.
Thuia Johanne.

An inquest was opened. According to the father, they have waiting too long before see the nurse. The others patients had commented that she was having difficulty breathing. The doctor Roger Malcolmson said that if she had been seen by somebody qualified, they would have led directly to the hospital. Who is right ? It is the nurse who is wrong or the child could have been saved ? Maybe the hospital lacks of staff. Elsewhere, one of the receptionists, Kyra Wheeler, said there had been between fifteen and twenty patients in the waiting room that day.
Jean Charlotte.

Conclusion :

By way of conclusion, we can say that if Mr Linforth would have been faster to see someone who is qualified, and above all, if he would have gone to the hospital closest from his house (there is barely thirty seconds path to go to the hospital, according to the words of Mr Linforth), Lucie might still be alive today: even if he say that he don’t know that his daughter will die, several witnesses who were in the waiting room could see how Lucie was seek… But, there is not that him who is in the wrong way: if the receptionists would have been passed Lucie at the first place, she could have been saved.
Marly Natacha.

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