The Iphone 5
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Membre's group :

Quentin Branka, Flor Boignée, Aurélien Gasnier et Antoine Lherbette .

American Members :

Enrique Vargas, Fabian Rodriguez, Joshua Carroll, Josh Stanley.

Here's the link to our press article : http://bits.blogs.nytimes.com/2012/09/21/the-iphone-5-now-on-the-loose/.

Correction

Introduction : The Iphone 5c is an entertaining device. It offers several applications such as : a calculator, a stopwatch or the weather. The iphone is better than any phone Apple has created. He has especially like concurrent SAMSUNG (I can't understand this sentence !) . This article describes the apparition of the Iphone 5c in a shop in New York on the day it was released. This article has been writen by a journalist :"Nick Wingfield". We will see in our first part that Iphone 5c attracts many people and in our second part than the Iphone 5c features new applications .
Written by Antoine Lherbette

First part : Friday 21 September 2012, at eight O'clock a.m, there was a crowd the Apple stores in New York, Boston and Minneapolis to buy the new Iphone 5. The following weekend, eight million Iphones would be sold. Eric Jue, Apple's manager for Iphone said that 1.300 people had to wait in line in the New York store to get the phone. On Monday 24 September, 2 million Iphone 5s had been sold . This figure was more than the Iphone 4. The people who had ordered the new Iphone 5 received it at home only three to four weeks after ordering. The Iphone 5 is a real success all over the world and people of all ages like it.
Written by Flor Boigné

Second Part : Apple Mr. said that the new application of Maps was just a beginning and that he believed that his new functions
would compensate for the domains where he is lacking sometimes, including indistinct readings or disappeared locations.
He explained that the company would improve the software over time, because the database of mapping matters on data of customer collecting data of location of his million customers of iPhone (I can't understand this sentence !).
Written by Aurélien Gasnier

Conclusion: the iphone 5 was a success everywhere in the world, in New York, at the first date of its apparition, many people had coveted it, it was a big success for Apple. The applications on iOS continues to advance, the systems of the iphones is constantly improving with each version Apple creates, Apple is at the heart of today's technology.
Written by Quentin Branka

Original text

Introduction : The Iphone 5c is a device entertraining. He is call of several applications such as : the calculator, the stopwatch or the weather. L'iphone is the better phone than Apple has created. He has especially like concurrent SAMSUNG. This article described the apparition oh Iphone 5c in booth New Yorkais, the same day of the output. This article has been write for a journalist :"Nick Wingfield". We saw in first part than Iphone 5c draw many people and in second part than the Iphone 5c features new application .
Write for Antoine Lherbette

Firt part : Friday 21 September 2012, at eight hour a.m, there was crowd in the shops of Apple's New York, Boston and Minneapolis to buy the new Iphone 5. The next weekend, eight million Iphone would be sold. Eric Jue, Apple's manager for Iphone to say that 1.300 people to wait in line in the shop's New York to get the phone. Monday 24 September, the Iphone 5 has sold for two million. This last was more than the Iphone 4S. The people who to oder the new Iphone 5, receives at home only three to four weeks after. The Iphone 5 is very success all over the world and the people of all years have very liked.
Written by Flor Boigné

Second Part : Apple Mr. said that the new application of Maps was just one beginning and that he believed that his new functions
would compensate for the domains where he is lacking sometimes, including indistinct readings or disappeared locations.
He explained that the company would improve the software over time,
because the database of mapping matters on data of customer collecting data of location of his million customers of iPhone.
Written by Aurélien Gasnier

Conclusion: the iphone 5 was a success everywhere in the world, in ew york, at the first date of his apparition, many people had coveted it, it was a big success for Apple. The applications on iOS continues to advance, the systems of the iphones perfects again and again at each other version what Apple create, Apple is a basic business of today technology.
Written by Quentin Branka

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