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GHOST by Michael Jackson
By Iosif STANCIU [CC-BY-SA-3.0 ], via Wikimedia Commons
Michael Jackson in 1985
Michael Jackson's Ghost is a short film starring Michael Jackson in 1996.
It was written by Stephen King and directed by Stan Winston .
The film tells the story of a scary Maestro with supernatural powers, who is being forced out of a small town by its mayor, pictured as a comically arrogant, plump man who bears more than a passing resemblance to Thomas Sneddon (the main prosecutor in Jackson's infamous child sexual abuse case from three years earlier). The movie includes a series of dance routines performed by Michael Jackson and his "family" of ghouls. Every song from the film was taken from Michael Jackson's History and Blood on the Dance Floor albums.
The running time is 39:31.
You can see the video of GHOST in YouTube : [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KHgGDtbS4TA]
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The Voca People are an Israel-based ensemble group performing vocal theater combining a cappella and beat box vocals to reproduce the sounds of an entire orchestra.
They The (creators) = leaders ?? are Lior Kalfon and Shai Fishman.
The Voca People claim to come from the Planet Voca (somewhere behind the sun) where all communication is based on music and vocal expressions. Their motto is: "Life is music and music is life."
The Voca People claim to be aliens from another planet where the main method of communication is sounds. Dressed completely white in appearance except their lips, which are red, they float around in space in their ship, which is powered by nothing more than music. They arrive on Earth which has a great repertoire of music. They have performed in Spain, New York, Hungary, Italy, France, England, Israel and many other places. They incorporate the public into their songs.
Beat On is the grand-brother of Scratcher.
Tubas is married with Alta.
Beat On: Boaz Ben David / Chen Zimerman / Leor Zeitouni / Mark Martin
Scratcher: Inon Ben David / Ofir Tal / Ran Cimer
Tubas: Eyal Cohen / Shimon Smith / Alon Shar
Tenoro: Gilan Shahaf / Ashot Gasparian / Jacob Schneinder / Nick Anastasia / Chris Dilley / Almog Kapach
Alta: Adi Kozlovsky / Maya Pennington / Vered Regev
Mezzo: Sapir Braier / Naama Levy / Vered Sasportas / Sharon Laloum
Bari-tone: Oded Goldstein / Moran Sofer / Jacob Schneinder / Matthew Bryan Feld
Soprana: Rahmin Liraz / Alona Alexander / Liran Saporta / Michelle Green / Doris Nemni / Michal Reshef
For a better description, to see on this site : [ http://voca-people.com/france_voca/site_fr/meet.html]
The official website of VocaPeople :
- in French : [http://voca-people.com/france_voca/site_fr/index.html]
- in English : [http://voca-people.com/index_a.html]
Wikipedia and official website of VocaPeople
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