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AMY WINEHOUSE
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Amy Winehouse in Berlin in 2007
Amy Jade Winehouse (14 September 1983 – 23 July 2011) was an English singer and songwriter knew known for her deep contralto vocals, and her electric mix of music genres including R&B, soul and jazz.
Childhood:
Amy was born in the Southgate area of north London in into a Jewish family. She was a normally had a normal childhood with her older brother: Alex. Her parents influenced her interest in jazz ; her father often sang Franck Sinatra songs to young Amy.
Her grandmother Cynthia was a singer, many of her uncles on the mother’s side of her family were professional jazz musicians.
She takes took her first singing lessons to at Susi Earnshaw Teatre School at the age of eight years old. After studying for four years to at Susi Earnshaw Teatre School, she was admitted to Sylvia Young Theatre School but it will be she was expelled and then she study studied at the Brit School.
Private life:
The singer known had problems with depression and alcohol addiction.
she had problems several times with the law (possession of illegal sustances ,violation of copyright …).
On 18 may 2007 Amy Winehouse got married to Blake Fielder-Civil in Miami, Florida.She admits admitted she is was violent with her husband when she is was drunk. Blake asks asked for a divorce in January 2009.
Early career:
She began working for a living, including, at one time, as an entertainment journalist for the World Entertainment News Network, in addition to singing with a local group "the Blosha band".
Her boyfriend at the time, soul singer ;Tyler James, sent a demo take tape to an A&R person.
Career:
Amy has attracted much media attention for her looks, her hairstyle, tattoos and eyeliner and has inspired many fashion designers.
Amy signed to up with Simon Fuller’s 19 management in 2002. Her A&R representative was Island Universal at Island/Universal
Amy's debut album, Frank, was released on 20 October 2003. It has many jazz songs influences jazz. his her songs were about the look she carries on his the way she looked upon relationships, the world, and music itself.
This album is **was— certified gold in England in February 2004.
Her album, Back to black, posthumously became the UK's best-selling album of the 21st century.
Video: Back to Black
Back to black is the title song of the album Back to black
Rewards:
- Winehouse's 2003 debut album, Frank was critically successful in the UK and it was nominated for the Mercury Prize. But she don't won the price it didn't win.
- Her 2006 follow-up album, Back to black, led to six Grammy Awards nominations and five wins, tying the then record for the most wins by a female artist in a single night, among the titles she won, there is was: best new artist, record of the year and song of the year.
-In 2007 she won a brit award for best British female artist.
- She won the Ivor Novello Award three times: in 2004, 2007 and 2008 for "Stronger than me", "Rehab" and "love is a loving game".
Video: Rehab
Rehab is one of the best songs on the album Frank
The On 23 July 2011, she died from an overdose alcohol and drugs in is her London flat in Camden Town . She died to at 27 years old therefore she parts to is sadly a member of the 27 club.
She will never mark a always inspire generations to come with his her style of music and voice.
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DIRTY DANCING
By Alan Light [CC-BY-2.0], via Wikimedia Commons
Jennifer Grey: Photo taken at 60th Academy Awards
By Alan Light [CC-BY-2.0], via Wikimedia Commons
Patrick Swayze on the red carpet at the 1989 Academy Awards
In both pictures there are the main characters of Dirty Dancing
Dirty Dancing is an American movie directed by Emile Ardolino in 1987. It's a romance and drama musical.
The Story plot of the film:
The story events of film take place in the summer 1963. Baby Houseman is 17 years old and she is in on holidays with her family, in the country to mountains Catskill mountains in the state of New York. Baby’s father is the doctor Jake Houseman. Baby have has to remplace replace Penny Johnson & dance for dancing with Johnny Castle because Penny Jhonson is pregnant. Johnny is a professor of dance teacher and he will learn the dance to Baby how to dance . Baby and Johnny will live a love story but Baby’s father don’t want that daughter out doesn't want his daughter to be going out with Johnny.
Character:
Patrick Swayze : Johnny Castle
Jennifer Grey : Frédérique Houseman, "Baby"
Jerry Orbach : Dr. Jake Houseman
Kelly Bishop : Marjorie Houseman
Cynthia Rhodes : Penny Johnson
Jack Weston : Max Kellerman
Max Cantor : Robbie Gould
Jane Brucker : Lisa Houseman
Lonny Price : Neil Kellerman
Charles Honi Coles : Tito Suarez
Neal Jones : Billy Kostecki
Wayne Knight : Stan
Music of the movie:
Be My Baby - The Ronettes
Big Girls Don't Cry - Frankie Valli et The Four Seasons
Where Are You Tonight - Tom Johnston
Do You Love Me - The Contours
Love Man - Otis Redding
Stay - Maurice Williams & The Zodiacs
Hungry Eyes - Eric Carmen
Overload - Zappacosta
Hey! Baby - Bruce Channel
De Todo Un Poco - Melon
Some Kind Of Wonderful - The Drifters
These Arms Of Mine - Otis Redding
Cry to Me - Solomon Burke
Will You Love Me Tomorrow - The Shirelles
Love Is Strange - Mickey & Sylvia
You Don't Own Me - The Blow Monkeys
Yes - Merry Clayton
In The Still Of The Nite - The FIve Satins
She's Like the Wind - Patrick Swayze
(I've Had) The Time of My Life - Bill Medley et Jennifer Warnes
The time of my life ( final dance)
Rewards:
The film has been very successful.
1988 : Amanda Award for best film
Oscar for best film song
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