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Edith PIAF

By Nationaal Archief, Den Haag, Rijksfotoarchief: Fotocollectie Algemeen Nederlands Fotopersbureau (ANEFO), 1945-1989 - negatiefstroken zwart/wit, nummer toegang, bestanddeelnummer 914-6440
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Édith Piaf in 1962

Her true name is Edith Giovanna Gassion. She was born 19 December 1915 in Paris. She died 10 October 1963 in Grasse ( Alpes Maritime ) at forty seven years old. She was French a singer of music-hall and French variety. Fifty years after her death she has remained still remains the most famous French interpreter in the whole world. She was called to these at the beginning « la môme piaf ». Songstress to the A singer with a sad(?) voice tragic, passionate by his about her job, she inspired of large famous composers. She was the mentor of large great young artists of renown international renown. Her and career is was difficult because she had problem of with her health. Edith did large success classic as most famous songs were:

- « La vie en rose »
- « Non je ne regrette rien »
- « Hymne à l’amour »
- « Mon légionnaire »
- « La foule »
- « Milord »
- « Mon dieu »
- « L’accordéoniste »

But she was also an actress to of theater and to cinema also.

" Edith PIAF". Wikipédia [en ligne] mise à jour le 3 Décembre 2012 http://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/%C3%89dith_Piaf Consulté le 14 Décembre 2012

Paul WESLEY (Paweł Thomas Wasilewski)

CC, By jjduncan_80, via flickr.com
Paul Wesley on the red carpet at the 38th People's Choice Awards on January 11, 2012, at the Nokia Theatre in Los Angeles, California.

Paul WESLEY was born 29 July 1982 New Brunswick, New Jersey. His nationality is American, and his profession is actor. This movie is His most famous movies are «Killer Movie” and “ Le cœur de l’océan" and the most notable series are «Fallen ", and " Vampire Diaries ". Paul is married to Torrey DeVitto known for his her role as Melissa Hastings Pretty Little Liars. She plays with him in Vampire Diaries Dr. Meredith Fell.

"Paul WESLEY". Wikipédia [en ligne] mise à jour le 11 Novembre 2012 http://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paul_Wesley Consulté le 14 Décembre 2012


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