El arabi kevin's movie and music

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Jason Statham

Jason Statham was born in Chesterfield in Great Britain in on 12 September 1967. He is forty five years old. He is English and a former driving diver. He is Britannic British. I choose chose Jason Statham because he is a great actor, he is our idol and he is beautiful handsome. Jason Statham is an English actor who succeed his fame became famous by taking a lead role in British crime movies.

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Jason Statham at the Toronto International Film Festival 2011

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He shoot shot many films such as:

-Safe (2012)
-Killer Elite (2012)
-King Rising 2 (2012)
-Blitz (2011)
-Le Flingueur The Mechanic (2010)
-Expendables : Unité spécial (2010)
-Hyper tension 2 (2009)
-Le Transporteur 3 Transporter 3 (2008)
-Death Race (2008)
- Braquage A L’anglaise The bank job (2008)
- King Rising (2007)
-Rogue : l’ultime affrontement War (2007)
-Hyper tension (2006)
-Chaos (2006)
-London (2005)
-Revolver (2005)

The best film for me it’s ’Transporteur is Transporter 3’.

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I like a transporteur Transporter 3 because there are many actions is lots of action, it’s an action film. The story is interesting. In this film Jason Statham must delive deliver a package.

Bibliographie : http://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jason_Statham
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Lil Wayne

Lil Wayne is an American rapper, he was born in New Orléans on September 27th, 1982. His real name is Dwayne Michael Carter Junior. He is the founder of the label Young Money Entertainment. He began to sing in 1990. In his field, he is well-known for her quadrilogyTha Carter. Lil Wayne begin began his career in 1999. In 2010 he goes went to prison, he will be condemned was sentenced to has 8 months of prison. After his release, he realizes witnesses his biggest sale of records because he will sell sold 964 000 copies during the first week. On 27 Octuber 2012, he makes a faintness (I can't understand the meaning of this sentence) but now everything goes good was going well.
Lil Wayne played in some movies. The first movie was “ BallerBlockin’ ” in 2000. The last one was “Hurricane Season “ in 2010. In all, he played in four movies. From 2007 till 2010, he was the actor of broadcast movies.

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For more information: http://lilwayne-online.com/bio/default.aspx
The official site : http://lilwayne-online.com/Default.aspx#!all
Bibliographie : http://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lil_Wayne
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