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Total = 13,5/20

4/6 points pour l'Anglais (assez bien écrit)
3/3 points pour le choix/Intérêt du texte (très intéressant)
1/3 points pour le texte personnel ou personnalisé (pas suffisamment personnalisé)
2/2 points pour le nombre de mots (ok)
0,5/2 points pour le respect droits (l’image du logo du film n’est pas libre de droit, il manque
la mention des droit et la légende pour la 1e image)

1/2 points pour la bibliographie (pas aux normes)
2/2 points pour l'organisation/mise en page (attrayant)

Linkin Park is a group of metal and American alternative rock formed in 1996 in Agoura Hills, California, led by Chester Bennington (vocals), Mike Shinoda (vocals, rap, guitar and keyboards), Brad Delson (guitar), Dave Farrell (bass guitar), Rob Bourdon (drums) and Joe Hahn (turntables, effects and mixing).

Members actual:

  • Chester Bennington: singer, guitarist and occasional percussionist.
  • Mike Shinoda: MC, second singer, guitarist, pianist, co-producer.
  • Brad Delson: lead guitarist, pianist and backup vocals.
  • Dave "Phoenix" Farrell: bassist, guitarist, violinist, backup vocals.
  • Rob Bourdon: Drummer.
  • Joe Hahn: DJ, backup vocals.

Former members:

  • Mark Wakefield: vocals.
  • Kyle Christener: bassist.
  • Scott Koziol: bassist.
  • Ian Hornbeck: bassist.
L'image est trop grande. Il manque la mention des droits (licence, nom de l'auteur, source), ainsi qu'une légende)

Bibliography :
La norme de présentation n'est pas respectée


Fast Five (alternatively known as Fast & Furious 5 or Fast & Furious 5: Rio Heist) is a 2011 American action film written by Chris Morgan and directed by Justin Lin. It is the fifth installment in the Fast and the Furious film series. It was released first in Australia on April 20, 2011, and then in the United States on April 29, 2011. Fast Five follows Dominic Toretto (Vin Diesel), Brian O'Conner (Paul Walker) and Mia Toretto (Jordana Brewster) as they plan a heist to steal $100 million from corrupt businessman Hernan Reyes (Joaquim de Almeida) while being pursued for arrest by U.S. Diplomatic Security Service (DSS) agent Luke Hobbs (Dwayne Johnson).


Vin Diesel as Dominic Toretto
A professional criminal, street racer and fugitive. Diesel was reportedly paid $15 million to star in and produce the film.
Paul Walker as Brian O'Conner
A former FBI agent turned criminal. He is in a relationship with Mia Toretto. Walker did many of his own stunts for the film, training with parkour professional Paul Darnell to improve his movement.
Dwayne Johnson as Luke Hobbs
A Diplomatic Security Service agent. According to producer Vin Diesel, the role of Hobbs was originally developed with Tommy Lee Jones in mind. However, when reading feedback on his Facebook page, Diesel noted a fan stating a desire to see Diesel and Johnson in a film together. Diesel and Lin then redesigned the role for Johnson. Johnson wanted to work with Universal Studios, citing their support for him during his transition from wrestling to acting.
Jordana Brewster as Mia Toretto Dominic's sister and the girlfriend of Brian O'Conner.

Tyrese Gibson as Roman Pearce
Brian's childhood friend. Gibson's involvement was confirmed on June 30, 2010. Gibson was committed to Transformers: Dark of the Moon at the time he signed on to Fast Five. He was forced to fly between Puerto Rico and Atlanta to accommodate both films.
Chris "Ludacris" Bridges as Tej Parker
Brian's and Roman's friend from Miami. Ludacris confirmed his involvement in the film on July 12, 2010, when he stated he had arrived in Puerto Rico to begin filming.
Matt Schulze as Vince Dominic's childhood friend. Schulze had appeared in the first film, and it was confirmed on July 16, 2010, that he would be returning.
Sung Kang as Han Seoul-Oh
A street racer and Dominic's business partner in the Dominican Republic.
Gal Gadot as Gisele Yashar
A former Mossad agent. Although Gadot had prior experience handling motorbikes, she was required to learn how to ride the larger, more powerful Ducati Streetfighter for the film.
Joaquim de Almeida as Hernan Reyes
A ruthless drug lord posing as a legitimate business man. It was confirmed on July 16, 2010, that Almeida would play antagonist Hernan Reyes. Having previously played several antagonists, he hesitated to take this role, but accepted it after speaking with Lin and hearing his take on the character.
Elsa Pataky as Elena Neves
A Rio police officer who works with Hobbs' team and becomes Dominic's. It was confirmed on July 16, 2010, that Pataky would take this role. She underwent several days of tactical training with a police/military technical advisor.

Le logo du film n'est pas libre de droits !

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