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Jason Statham
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Jason Statham at the Toronto International Film Festival 2011
Jason Statham was born in Chesterfield in Great Britain in on 12 September 1967. He is forty five years old. He is English and a former driving diver. He is Britannic British. I choose chose Jason Statham because he is a great actor, he is our idol and he is beautiful handsome. Jason Statham is an English actor who succeed his fame became famous by taking a lead role in British crime movies. His surnom nickname is Jay and he is 1.78m tall.
He shoot shot many films such as:
-Safe (2012)
-Killer Elite (2012)
-King Rising 2 (2012)
-Blitz (2011)
-Le Flingueur The Mechanic (2010)
-Expendables : Unité spécial (2010)
-Hyper tension 2 (2009)
-Le Transporteur 3 Transporter 3 (2008)
-Death Race (2008)
- Braquage A L’anglaise The bank job (2008)
- King Rising (2007)
-Rogue : l’ultime affrontement War (2007)
-Hyper tension (2006)
-Chaos (2006)
-London (2005)
-Revolver (2005)
The best film for me it’s ’Transporteur is Transporter 3’.
I like a transporteur Transporter 3 because there are many actions is lots of action, it’s an action film. The story is interesting. In this film Jason Statham must delive deliver a package.
Bibliography:
http://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jason_Statham
http://www.imdb.fr/name/nm0005458/
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