Carrier Supiot Greg S Blog

To my mind, to be a good employee in a society you must be the more polished with everybody about any situation. Indeed the workplace isn’t a place to show your pride. Moreover you have the obligation to be the best in that you made because overnight your boss can easily fire you. Even if there isn’t reason of dismissal, he will can search another reason. On the other hand, I think to be a good employee you have to like that you do! So many people don’t like their job. Probably because they don’t have the choice. That is why the professional life is decided from school route. As regards the physical appearance, I agree with the fact that you must be clean on one, I want say: shave for men, attached hair for women… So the punctuality is an important point quite as the honesty. To conclude I will say that to be good in your job, the work atmosphere and conditions have to bester. In this way your work will be effective and fast. (180)

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To my mind, to be a good employee in a company you must be very polite with everybody in any situation. Indeed the workplace isn’t a place to show your pride. Moreover you have the obligation to be the best at what you do because overnight your boss can easily fire you. Even if there isn’t any reason for dismissal, he can find another reason. On the other hand, I think to be a good employee you have to like what you do! But many people don’t like their jobs. This is probably because they don’t have the choice. That is why professional life is decided after leaving school. As regards physical appearance, I agree with the fact that you must be clean: shaven for men & hair tied up for women… So punctuality is an important point as is honesty. To conclude I would say that to be good in your job, the work atmosphere and conditions have to good. In this way your work will be effective and fast. (180)