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Lana Del Rey
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Her real name is Elizabeth Woolridge Grant also know known under the name of Lana Del Rey, Lizzy Grant, etc… She was born in the on 21, June, 1986 (she is 26 years old today) in New York. Her occupations are She is a singer, songerie songwriter, musician and fashion model. Her music genres styles are India Indian pop, alternative and sad core. Today, she lives She has been living in Golgow Glasgow since October 2011. She was sent to Kent School, a boarding school in Connecticut, to deal with her alcohol dependence before heading back to her hometown at the age of eighteen. Del Rey then attended Fordham University in New York City, studying a branch of philosophy known as metaphysics. She was decided to become a singer 11 years after listening to Kunt Cobain. He She has never taken singing lessons, but her voice can cover a wide range of sounds. Her uncle taught her how to play guitar, and she realized she could probably write a million songs with those six chords, and began performing in clubs around the city under various names such as Sparkle Jump Rope Queen, Lizzy Grant and The Phenomena. When she got to New York City at the age of eighteen, she starts started playing in Brooklyn’ clubs. She signed her first recording contract when she was twenty years old, her first acoustic album was “Sirens” under the name of May Jailer but her disc went unnoticed. Very surprised its lack of success Lana Del Rey though thought these songs haven’t got the chance to be appreciated and, tired by polemics, she said that her album “Born to Die” could be his her last.
-She won a reward to at the Q Awards in the category Q’S Next Big Thing
-She was nominated in the ceremony Virgin Media Music Awards in the category Best Next Artist
She has lot nominated had lots of nominations and rewards awards such as for the hit, Video Games. She has was nominated in the ceremony Independent Music Awards in the category Favorite International Video of the Year and in the ceremony NME Award in the category Best track and Best Video. She also won an has reward in award at the ceremony Ivor Novello Awards in the category Best Contemporary Song. Del Rey has endorsed clothing line H&M, serving as model for their Fall and Winter 2012 collection. In 2012, Del Rey became the face of the Jaguar F-Type luxury automobile. The name Lana Del Rey comes from the combination of the first name of Hollywood actress Lana Turner and of the Chevrolet Delrey from the year 1950s. This name remembers reminds her friends of Cuba and it sounded wonderful good in all languages. Lizzy Grant decides of decided to become permanently Lana Del Rey in June 2011. She said that at the time she wanted to be part of these talented musicians and the fashion it’s inspires, fault of not being able to seek advice from those friends, since she had was little.
Her dream was to meeting meet people, falling fall in love and builds build a community around it as was done like back in the 1960s. She was a big drinker at the time and she has several tattoos on the hand and, on numerous occasions, Del Rey has been accused of having had rhinoplasty and lip augmentation, to which she ceaselessly refutes.